英文として意味がおかしく感じたところだけ書き換えて見ました。
ご検討ください。
× And I'm a big fan of yours. ○ And I'm your ardent fan. × Decent three-place finish at the Eric Bompard Trophy, congratulations. ○ Above all, congratulations on your winning the third place at the Eric Bompard Trophy. × Great acting of Mr.Ten look in free skating in the short program, and I was very happy. ○ I was very happy, because I could watch your great acting in the short program and in the free skating, too. × Exhibition was also highest. ○ Your performance at the exhibition was wonderful, too.